Revised treatments and Storyboards

Below is my revised written treatment, I have shortened it by making it less specific and excluding some of the unnecessary description.

Short:

Mystery and bewilderment build up to an exciting encounter.

Long:

Cold darkness surrounds a silhouetted figure making its way through an urban nightmare. Danger lingers at every turn as the elusive answers to a puzzling mystery remain to be answered. Shadows lurk in every crevice as suspense and tension build up to an eventful encounter.

In addition to this I have finally had the chance to scan in my storyboards and therefore compiled them with the explanations typed up alongside them.

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